IndieDance's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Caught in the Moment]

nott badd =]

the snare/ cymbol/ clap or whatever you use thats the second sound to come in is too loud.

otherthen that, nice work =]

and instead of doing the bass beat that comes in at 0:28, try making that same thing, but with a synthie sound, and same with the one at 0:43, then this could be somewhat of a drum and bass song.

pretty cool though, a style i havent really heard but well done =]

keep it up

-AriA

if you have time, come take a look at my stuff =]

9/10 5/5

PS: i LOVE the part at 1:32 ish or whatever, thats sweet. would be better with a synthie melody.

[Lovely Lady (Dj Janze rmx)]

nicely done =]

awesome

thats all i can say =] great and well done.

i gotta figure out how to add vocals to my songs =[

DJ-Janze responds:

thanks =) great cooment. i can help you if you senp pm.

[Dj Clayface - Random Melody]

dayum nice

there is a sctrachy noise in the background that you gotta master, its pretty squeeky and annoying lol.

but other then that, well done, change the squeekeness and you got a solid song here =]

and try changing note sizes, like mi b4 songs are kinda like this, but mi newest one has a bunch of diff notes and i think its a lot better.

keep it up tho.

- AriA

take a look at my stuff too =]

[VGO - BK - Mad Monster Mansion]

dude whoa

yeh, its like a real orchestra, but it needs to be mastered more.

ahh this is sick =]

but sometimes instruments come in, the one at 0:43, that sounds bad, but when it leaves its awesome.

dude this is SKILL, you should try and write it out and actually have people play it.

not goona lie, im my opinion i think this most definitely deserves top 50 if you master it completly, make sure it sounds perfect, and crisp and clear.

VERY VERY well done.

- AriA

come take a look at my stuff too =]

DjThunderbass responds:

i will try to do better neXtT time

[The Way I See The End]

decent

its pretty good, i think you need more of a umph in your kick, and make ur main melody louder and that scratchy "melody" thing you have in the beginning shuold get quitter, so u can still hear it, but the main melody should take over.

also, you might want to make the main melody more "scratchy/ synthie" and at the same time, you definitely should make sure you have some sort of melody at all times, like at 0:54, it just like some guy beat boxing kinda, and he is throughout the whole song, yet when the melody is there, its kinda less audible.

i would replace the beat boxer thingy w/ some other sound, thats pretty annoying lol .

but overall pretty well put together =]

keep it up.

- AriA

come take a look at my stuff to if you want.

[Techno Demo #001]

decent

yes, as said below, simple and affective =]

make your melody more "synthie" and like make it more unique and crazy / fast

and add a LOUD kick, and u def gotta master that voice thing that comes in at 0:24, that needs work.

otherwise keep it up

- AriA

[(EDJ) Tribute]

dayum =]

i love it, nice work. add more bass though =]

and well done keep it up, jeez wow =]

check out my stuff too =]

- AriA

EnkoreDJ responds:

i have more bass in my dance songs :)
and sure ill give your stuff a checkout :P

[Undertow Dream demo 2]

def relaxing lol

ill give it to u cuz its relazing, but not really ambient, nor reallly that great xD

look up popular ambient styles and add mroe sounds, like strings, violins and such.

but try adding in a bit of drumz. but overall well put togethor melody. keep it up!

- AriA
check out mi stuff too! =]

ShinyArmor responds:

oh wow, i remember you. i have reviewd some of you stuff before. i like most of them. (i've only heard two) i'll go check out some others

and thanks

[Parker House & Theory - AD4]

ahh GOOD! =]

never really liked indie music....other then now xD

pretty good =] keep it up i likeddd itt !

- AriA

check out mi stuff too! =]

[gog]

u got a 4 =]

u def deserve a four, but dude, you need to learn more music theory i guess.

u gotta come up with one solid melody, that repeats, not annoyingly, but fittingly throughout the song, then add a kick/ drumz and u need WAY more sounds.

though this is classical, it still needs drumz and strings/ violins and such. it has to be "orchestral" kinda, but plane old piano is kinda boring.

but good melody overall =]

keep it up!
-AriA

check out mi stuff too!

14etan responds:

well i got a long time to improve "im only 15" music theory im still taking chemistry! not to mention i wrote the whole thing by ear and spent 3 days on it like 2 hours a day im doin dis as a side side hobby but thnks anyway wow a 4 im realy shocked my other songs are 1s and 3s yay 4