IndieDance's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[OverLoad WiP 3]

pretty good =]

im liking where this is going.

finish it and master it a bit but overall well done.

keep it up =]

(at 0:46) though, it sounds a lot like basshunter ^^

anyway, come take a look at my stuff too! =]

- AriA

LK412 responds:

Thanks for the review man! I check your page regularly so dont worry about that =D. Thanks again.

[Life in a drop of Water]

Oo nice =]

this is definitely relaxing, but i love the intro, as said before, it could definitely become a dance/ trance track =]

if you don't mind, i'd like to take a go =]

come take a look at my stuff too! =]
and well done =]

- AriA

Bobox responds:

I've listened to some of your tracks, and yes, you can try and expand this, even though I already made other versions (but they need some serious work, so go ahead remix this as long as you give me credit for it ;) I'll write some reviews as soon as I get more spare time.

[| LK | Sensation]

nice work

good, but i think the song looses its "feel" i guess at like 1:05 because its WAYY too loud.

because all your sounds are coming together, you gotta have flow. like just make it an arp? strings kick and stuff.

like same thing again at 1:45, i can really only hear your bass=\. and then those claps make it sounds ridiculously ahhhh i wana hear em xD

you gotta work on mastering, which is the art of making ALL of your sounds audible, instead of just packing them onto each other making a loud mess.

but you got lucky =] ur "mess" actually sounded pretty decent. but this could be a LOT LOT LOT better.

im giving u a 8, but really like a 8.5, which is like a 9.

so you get a 5/5 =]

keep it up!

- AriA

LK412 responds:

I really wanna learn how to master but i just get lazy and dont wanna go look up a tutorial. I guess im gonna have to if i want to make good songs. Thanks for the review man.

[-<{AnxietyClock}>-]

omg =\ so much potential

this could be AWESOME, needs WAYYYY more kick, a nice buildup (yours is pretttyyy good, though )

and yeh as stated below, the bass is 100% needed.

not bad though =]

-AriA

Come take a look at my stuff too =]

FlyMusik responds:

I do agree that i didn't use much bass, and i could've used better harmony around 0:45 secs. Thanx for the advice =]

[~|| First Chance [Demo]]

uhm?

10 actually. but that second melody you use isn't yours....

I've heard it thousands of times in Hindi songs, lol, don't try and pass it off as your own....at least say its a remix....

all you do is take the melody and arp it...that kinda po's me.

T-Free responds:

Really? O.O"
I just took the eurogate in the sequenzer from sytrus. This is used very often in lots of tracks, but the melody itself...? I don't think so.
Could you give me an example for this melody, please? I've never heared one like this on NG.^^° But maybe you could show me the opposite.
If not, I won't say that this is a remix. It's in your hands.
Thank you.^^

[Once Again {Toothbrush Remix}]

goodie! =]

very well done, the only thing i can say i didn't like was the obscenely long introduction,

and at 2:08, and farther there is something VERY small, that needs to be mastered that makes such a beautiful melody sound scratchy, i can barely notice it but still, i can xD.

same thing at like 2:56 there is like an arp sound or something that comes in and it takes away from the beauty =\

aniway good work and keep it up! =]

- AriA
Come take a look at my stuff too! =]

KennyT67 responds:

Thanks for Listening.

lol love how u put that "obscenely long intro" i think it fits, but thanks for the review. always appreciated :)

i also like your stuff too very good work.

[Lovely Lady (Dj Janze rmx)]

nicely done =]

awesome

thats all i can say =] great and well done.

i gotta figure out how to add vocals to my songs =[

DJ-Janze responds:

thanks =) great cooment. i can help you if you senp pm.

[VGO - BK - Mad Monster Mansion]

dude whoa

yeh, its like a real orchestra, but it needs to be mastered more.

ahh this is sick =]

but sometimes instruments come in, the one at 0:43, that sounds bad, but when it leaves its awesome.

dude this is SKILL, you should try and write it out and actually have people play it.

not goona lie, im my opinion i think this most definitely deserves top 50 if you master it completly, make sure it sounds perfect, and crisp and clear.

VERY VERY well done.

- AriA

come take a look at my stuff too =]

DjThunderbass responds:

i will try to do better neXtT time

[(EDJ) Tribute]

dayum =]

i love it, nice work. add more bass though =]

and well done keep it up, jeez wow =]

check out my stuff too =]

- AriA

EnkoreDJ responds:

i have more bass in my dance songs :)
and sure ill give your stuff a checkout :P

[Undertow Dream demo 2]

def relaxing lol

ill give it to u cuz its relazing, but not really ambient, nor reallly that great xD

look up popular ambient styles and add mroe sounds, like strings, violins and such.

but try adding in a bit of drumz. but overall well put togethor melody. keep it up!

- AriA
check out mi stuff too! =]

ShinyArmor responds:

oh wow, i remember you. i have reviewd some of you stuff before. i like most of them. (i've only heard two) i'll go check out some others

and thanks