u got a 4 =]
u def deserve a four, but dude, you need to learn more music theory i guess.
u gotta come up with one solid melody, that repeats, not annoyingly, but fittingly throughout the song, then add a kick/ drumz and u need WAY more sounds.
though this is classical, it still needs drumz and strings/ violins and such. it has to be "orchestral" kinda, but plane old piano is kinda boring.
but good melody overall =]
keep it up!
-AriA
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well i got a long time to improve "im only 15" music theory im still taking chemistry! not to mention i wrote the whole thing by ear and spent 3 days on it like 2 hours a day im doin dis as a side side hobby but thnks anyway wow a 4 im realy shocked my other songs are 1s and 3s yay 4
decent.
its not really in any style, but this is a song taht could easily become trance.
but at like 1:09 and forawrd, without the strings the sounds is like scratchy and annoying, try and fix that.
otherwise add a kick =] make it loud, make it up-beat. and your good to go!
keep it up =]
- AriA
check out mi stuff too! =]
yeah, i had a rather difficult time trying to pin this song down to a genre, so i ulitmately decided to list it under miscellaneous. but, thank you for your opinion. i'll be sure to check out your art soon!
good
i liked it =]
well done, not my type of genera though, but VERY well done, classical music in my opinion is probably the hardest to produce, keep it up.
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Thank you very much for listening!
I will indeed listen to some of your things.
-HFX ^_^
great =]
i loved it, well done and keep it up, the melody accompanied the rest of the stuff very well, and the trance sweeps you had were well incorporated.
keep it up! =]
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and LOL you got zero bombed =[ stupid zero bombers. this song is great, dont worry abt the score lol.
ROFL thats the first time anyone's laughed at me for being bombed XD anyway, i really appreciate the review!! They count way more than the score to me personally anyway XD
Thanks again for the review and I will definitely check yours out!
good =]
i LOVEED Dk, but you should add synthie suonds to it, to make it more then just the dk sound xD
good though =]
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- AriA
Thanks, ill take a look at your stuff, but no matter what i did to this song it would sound good cuz its a really good song =D
goodd =]]
i like it, well done and keep it up.
i LOVE that you have vocals, its makes it so much more interesing =]
good, and well done.
Thank You I'll Make Sure When The Remix Comes Out I'll Keep The Vocals
in It.
loved =]
awesome, well done, well put togethor and i absoultely loveeee it =]
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*EDIT: there are like a few REALLLYYYY RIDICILOUSLY high pitched notes around
2:00 and they keep appearing , take those out xD *
good though =]
Well.. they don't really sound that ridiculous. But here the quality of the song is cut down i think and that's why they are so high pithed. Glad you like it tho. I wont forget to chek your stuff too..
ohh snep=]
goodie dude, sept i wud put this under classical i guess, otherwise wowws well done.
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hehe i don't know if the drums let it sit in classical
gooodiie =]
but seriously, clap attack LOL =]
good, i liked it though. add moree melody rather then clappies xD
the claps kinda gott annoyingg but still, it was overall well done =]
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Yeah... the claps... are almost seizure like XD
better, still needs work though.
more like a 8.5, better then the originall, but dont make the "reeverb" so loud on the instruments you use, otherwise pretty decent.
needs more melody though.
keep it up =]
thanks.
the reeverb was supposed to be SUPER high on those sounds.
and even if i wanted to: i can't go back and change it.
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